Joseph, Nice work on your elevator pitch it was very convincing and incorporates statistics that back up the product. One thing I do think is concerning is the camera because although the toy is indestructible it could cause some negative side effects towards the dog. Overall, I think this product is interesting and would have potential.
Hey Joseph, first thing I noticed is that the video showed up upside down on your blog post. I really like the convincing of the way you spoke throughout your video. You used a good amount of reasoning in your pitch that I feel would make someone more convinced. I did notice that it seemed like you were trying to sell you idea more to a potential customer and less to a group of investors.
Joseph,
ReplyDeleteNice work on your elevator pitch it was very convincing and incorporates statistics that back up the product. One thing I do think is concerning is the camera because although the toy is indestructible it could cause some negative side effects towards the dog. Overall, I think this product is interesting and would have potential.
Hey Joseph, first thing I noticed is that the video showed up upside down on your blog post. I really like the convincing of the way you spoke throughout your video. You used a good amount of reasoning in your pitch that I feel would make someone more convinced. I did notice that it seemed like you were trying to sell you idea more to a potential customer and less to a group of investors.
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