1) Video link: https://youtu.be/Ei56fESB1kI
2) Once again, I did not get any feedback for the elevator pitch I did. As a result, I decided that I would try to change my presentation a little.
3) To change my presentation and make it even more refined, I decided to include more hand motions, and I also decided to use more fluctuations in the volume of my voice just like Phil Swift of Flex Tape does. Also, since this is the third time I am doing this pitch, I have my script memorized. This means that there will be no pauses like what happened during the first attempt at this assignment a few weeks ago. Also, I tried to decrease my use of fillers to almost zero. I believe when you use many fillers, you look like you have not rehearsed the presentation enough, which shows you do not care enough about your work. I hope you enjoy my third pitch.
Hi Joseph,
ReplyDeleteI think your pitch did a great job on selling your product and convincing the listener that the toy is indestructible. I think the hand gestures can be a little distracting at times. However, your enthusiasm throughout the pitch was great and helped keep the listener engaged. This pitch shows that you are comfortable talking about your product and can even provide some statistics. Great job!
Hi Joseph,
ReplyDeleteI liked your pitch, it seemed very informative and you gave solid evidence of it's reliability. The fact that you spoke about going to see the reviews and mentioned stats that the dog toy cannot be destroyed was a good idea. In addition, it is good that you included the number to call to order the product, it is easy to secure a purchase right then and there rather than have the audience forget about it.